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What Beta readers for Ascendia Chronicles Book 1 are saying
You do big, cinematic moments so well. This ending has weight and heart. It made me care about these characters a lot, and that’s the hardest part to pull off.
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Very strong. Very emotional. Kind of stunned in a good way.
This ending gives the exact feeling of “everything mattered”.
All the small things the dogs did, all the tiny choices Mace made earlier, every time he refused to abandon someone… it all comes back in this huge, final moment. That feels extremely satisfying.
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